Thursday, 19 August 2021

Quirky Persuasive Writing !

 Statement: Monkeys should have their own branded toilet paper in Hawaii

Due to some research, human toilet paper is not good for the Monkey's skin which is why they need their own kind. Most people say that Monkeys are more valuable than every animal in the world because of the amount of smartness they hold.

Monkey’s are mostly known in Hawaii, they show up everywhere, in your room, KFC, beside you, and mostly in your toilet. Did you know that 50% of monkey’s stop by your house to have a little toilet break ?... Have you ever wondered why monkeys have recently started losing population??. 

Well it’s because of the Human toilet paper. Whenever they use it, it makes their skin rougher than it is, and then a few days later, you know what will happen.

We don’t wanna lose more do we ? NO!! We don’t, so help them now and help figure out a way to make some Monkey Toilet Paper. 
Thank you for your time:) !

Task description :
This week we have been working on Quirky Persuasive writing. Before we started writing we had to pick 1 word from each topic. Animal, Object/Thing, and Place, I chose 'Monkey, Toilet Paper, and Hawaii'

Disclaimer: Don't be mad if none of these 'facts' seem familiar to you, they're all fake, it was just to help Persuade:). Take care guyyyz !


  1. Kia ora Norah-Jade,
    You've really put your vivid imagination to work in this piece of writing - well done! I'm convinced - time to start researching a new product line of monkey-friendly items! What about shampoo? toothpaste? or hand sanitiser? I think you might be on to a'real' winner Norah-Jade!
    Keep up the excellent effort with your online learning.
    Stay well, stay safe!
    Take care, Ms. Tapuke

    1. Hi! Ms Tapuke!!
      I really miss you being around our space! and all the comments you used to do, Wow!! you've still got those amazing creative ideas rounded up in your thoughts!!
      Take Care !!,

  2. Kia ora Norah-Jade,
    It's always a pleasure to read your writing.
    I know you love to read - my advice: keep reading lots because good readers make good writers. The more you read, the more chances you have to pick up super interesting words and phrases AND you get to see how other people express their ideas - the best part is you can try them out in your own writing.
    I'll drop back again next week and see what you've created:)
    Stay in touch!
    Ms. Tapuke