Walt: paint an image in the readers mind.
The ocean is a beautiful blue colour and it is also so clear that you might even get to see a dolphin swimming, it is also very shiny and sparkly. The sand is a very beautiful gold colour that blends in with the ocean and is also very soft when you touch it, when the ocean crashes in the sand will be wet and will be a light brown colour. When you look up at the sky you will see a white and greyish colour in the clouds, and a very beautiful turquoise colour in the sky, you will also sometimes see some birds flying up in the sky. Then a fluffy dog came along washing itself in the ocean and the dog is white like a marshmallow floating in the air and the fluffy dog is also big like a normal dog.
Ocean, Sand, Sky, Imagination,
Task description: First we were all siting on the mat then Mr Goodwin showed us this task we had to do then he showed us what to do then we all went off and did the task that he gave us.
